I think that what you posted was very reasonable. But, think about this, suppose you were to create a killer post title? I mean, I don’t wish to tell you how to run your blog, however what if you added a post title to maybe get folk’s attention? I mean %BLOG_TITLE% is a little plain. You ought to look at Yahoo’s home page and note how they create news titles to get viewers interested. You might add a related video or a related pic or two to grab readers excited about what you’ve written. In my opinion, it might make your posts a little bit more interesting.
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